【答案】

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,,’,,,collegestudentsarethemostenergeticgroup,soencouragingthemtobeengagedinbusinessearlywillbenefitournationwithmoreinnovation.

Nevertheless,beneficialasthepolicyis,notallthestudentsprefertodoingbusiness,meincluded.Moneyisthefirstproblemtoapoorstudent.It’simpossibletorunabusinesswithoutfund.Secondly,lackofsocialexperiencewillsurelymakemybusinessendinfailureifstarted.Mostimportantly,Iamnotkeenonbusinessatall.Astablejobandeasylifeismybiggestambition.

Tosumup,Iwholeheartedlyapproveofthenewregulationbutwon’tchoosetoestablishmyownbusinessatcollege.

【解析】

试题分析：最近，教育部出台新规，允许在校大学生休学一年进行创业，引发了广泛热议。为此，你们学校将以此为话题组织英文演讲比赛。请你准备一篇演讲稿，字数150左右，参与比赛。你的演讲要包括以下几个方面：1、你对此新规的看法；2、进入大学的你是否会休学创业；3、阐述上述两点时必须各提供至少2条理由或论据加以支撑。【写作要求】1．内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当；2．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。3．开头已给出，不计入总词数。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯.要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

【亮点说明】Asweallknow,manycollegegraduatescan’tfindajobupontheirgraduation.句中运用了非限制性定语从句；Startingabusiness,particularlybeforegraduating,isagoodwaytoeasethetension.动名词短语作主语；Moreover,collegestudentsarethemostenergeticgroup,soencouragingthemtobeengagedinbusinessearlywillbenefitournationwithmoreinnovation.并列句和动名词短语作主语的完美结合；Nevertheless,beneficialasthepolicyis,notallthestudentsprefertodoingbusiness,meincluded.部分否定出现在句中；Mostimportantly,Iamnotkeenonbusinessatall.Astablejobandeasylifeismybiggestambition.句中运用了最高级；Tosumup,Iwholeheartedlyapproveofthenewregulationbutwon’tchoosetoestablishmyownbusinessatcollege.动词不定式的独立成分和表示转折的并列句巧妙结合。

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